back to my question about the holidays.. does this sound like a good invitation?

back to my question about the holidays.. does this sound like a good invitation?

The lewis' will be having the holidays in their home. You are welcome to join us any time between (4-10 pm Thanksgiving day) (4-10 pm Christmas eve, 4-10 pm Christmas day). Please let us know in advance if you decide to spend the holidays with us. We also ask that you bring a side dish or dessert. We will be having turkey, stuffing, yams, corn, mashed potatoes and gravy,  and pecan pie.