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If you saw this on the book shelves somewhere. Would you pick this up and read it?

If you saw this on the book shelves somewhere. Would you pick this up and read it?

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mychemicalshaymance

Shay

I've always been told to never judge a book by it's cover.

Some interesting books have amazing covers and some don't. The same can be said for horribly written ones.

Maybe change up the back description.

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piercedmom3

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Change it how.

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mychemicalshaymance

Shay

@young.beautiful3 just keep it about the plot of the book. Juicy details that don't give too much away. Like how in essays you need a topic sentence that catches the readers attention wanting more.

Have everything regarding your life and how it's your first book on the page after the title page so you can go more in-depth about it if you choose to.

This is all completely optional and up to you though. Congratulations though!!

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piercedmom3

Keya

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thank you.

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luna_bear

Luna_bear

Looks interesting. I'd read it. But like @mychemicalshaymance said, I'd make the back description just describe the plot, not anything personal. I also feel like the word "life" is repeated too often. Maybe try to eliminate some or replace with a similar word.

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